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prediction. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:56:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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steel pulse. . . veins tingered
by the heat. . . of whats to come
lifes' shifting light-house
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-07-28 06:56:04]
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Re: prediction. . .
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 11:15:47 AM AEST
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| I love these short poetry that brings a new air to the soul |
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Re: prediction. . .
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by Lele on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 12:36:47 PM AEST
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This poem is like a summer day,
whose lights reaches into the soul
and body is excited by enjoyments
that come from all pure love.
Congratulations
Leandro Monteiro |
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Re: prediction. . .
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 03:17:22 PM AEST
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i like the last line alot, brings deep, vivid imagery. keep it up with these haiku!
take care
-K.Z. |
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