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pattern-maker. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:30:39 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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straight as an arrow
solid as a rock. . . bursting
wave of consciousness
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-07-28 06:30:39]
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Re: pattern-maker. . .
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:38:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece! :)
--Heidi |
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Re: pattern-maker. . .
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by Lele on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 12:10:48 PM AEST
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This hai-ku can be seen as a metaphor of courage's and ethic's atittudes that all man shall be.
Good language, good poem.
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Re: pattern-maker. . .
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 03:14:01 PM AEST
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nice, kinda tells me that i should focus more and concentrate (like orange juice, corny joke ha) on the things that matter most and not waste time on other miniscule things. good job
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