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Shadow of her
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 10:43:19 PM in AEST
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Her thoughts take her away
to a place she wants to stay
if she could but slip away
lost within herself.
She feels her self slipping
far into the dark.
Inside the recesses
with the pain mixed in heart.
A mere shadow she has become
as she peacefully comes undone.
Beside her soul a shadow
the mere shadow of herself.
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shelby
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2009-07-27 22:43:19]
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Re: Shadow of her
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 11:12:23 PM AEST
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I think I know what inspired this and I'm there with ya'. Eventually things get better, dear.
Lovely yet melancholy poem.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Shadow of her
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 12:36:46 AM AEST
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Well done, I enjoyed the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: Shadow of her
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:42:09 AM AEST
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I love this piece. I have felt like a mere shadow of myself at times. Very well-written!
---Heidi |
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Re: Shadow of her
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 02:23:44 PM AEST
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Michelle,
This piece is exquisite in its melancholy.
One that I can relate to and hold inside myself.
Peace my friend
~Shannon |
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Re: Shadow of her
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 05:09:31 PM AEST
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I can relate.
We're all constently changing.
Good work, girl
Huggs, blessing,
emy |
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Re: Shadow of her
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by Fawkes on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 02:11:22 PM AEST
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Michelle,
Very good poem- short and sweet.
Love the silibance, it ensures a feeling of sorrow whilst the gentle and simple words creating such a complex atmosphere of confusion and doubt.
Good going! |
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