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Our Quiet Love
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On a swing hung from an apple tree,in the shade out of the heat
Lazily moving back and forth,in a summer dress,bare feet
Gazing across the lush green fields,dreams alive so free
Looking up from where you work,you cast your smile to me
So beautiful this time of year,coloured blossoms everywhere
Scented breezes,warm and sweet,move through my flowing hair
The sun beats down upon your face,as you tend to summers earth
And as you look at me so lovingly,my heart sings with rebirth
Poplar trees hum in tune,to the rhythm of a tender breeze
My voice is found as I hum along,such magic times are these
Watching you and smiling,I feel proud and start to blush
For even in these quiet times,still I feel your love so much
The earth has been replenished,soothed by your own hands
For where there was only dust,a frangipani tree now stands
As we look warmly at each other,we smile contentedly
For the way we make each other feel,as we love so quietly
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LovingWhispers
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2003-03-29 18:05:00]
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:13:03 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely...you have captured a nice time in life......I really enjoyed this..... |
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:19:42 AM AEST
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| I can just imagine this scene ... what a beautiful poem, full of love, nature and peacefulness... lovely write .. Jan |
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:55:29 AM AEST
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I felt it...in my heart. I hope I planted it where you wanted :o) ( heaven's just a dream away baby..... happy sigh)
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))))))))))))
Roses at your feet |
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:14:09 AM AEST
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| i don't know what a frangipani tree is but it adds to the whole lovely romantic overall of this poem, thanks for sharing:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:33:16 PM AEST
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| Real love beautifully described |
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Re: Our Quiet Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:06:32 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so beautiful....thank you, Sharon...
Jenni |
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