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A word of advice
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
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Don't tell me you know cause you know nothing.
Don't tell me to go away cause I will send you away.
Don't tell me to shut up for I will shut your mouth forever.
Don't tell me yes cause I know your lying ways.
Don't tell me no because I know what you will do to me.
You're a crazy person a poison to my soul. Would you like to know a kindred or would you just like to know? I hate your words, they speak nothing to me. Red is what your face turns to when I scream at you, why do you make me scream?
Your body is so small yet again it is so big.
How do you tend to mesmerize me?
Your weak I'm strong yet I'm unwholesome.
You're always rampaging about the war when you're the one making it.
Let me tell you something...just get over your psychedelic ways and wake up.
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Re: A word of advice
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 02:09:11 AM AEST
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| Well, thanks for commenting my poems : Aurora, Pulse... Forever... and On A Night Like This. I appreciate it. And your poem here is good. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: A word of advice
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by Percursors on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:55:36 AM AEST
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| This poem is really good! “Would you like to know a kindred or would you just like to know? I hate your words, they speak nothing to me” I loved those lines! This is a really nice write, good job. |
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Re: A word of advice
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by TundraHydra on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:37:40 AM AEST
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| I think this is a wakeup call to a lot of people. Personally there are times when I would "just like to know" as you so eloquently put it. Love the advise Keep writing |
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Re: A word of advice
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:29:43 PM AEST
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| I like it and I don't know why you say your not a good poet. When I think you are. I don't know you but you're a good one |
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