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Darryl
Contributed by
the_unknown
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Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 01:52:58 AM in AEST
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Note: This is no brilliant piece of art. Merely a simple story in a chapter of my life, a story I needed to let out. For some reason, I can't keep this one in.
I lusted after him for so long
He was all that I could want in a guy
I wanted him so bad
I finally got him
And I was so happy
It could have been love
But too soon we were over
Now I'm just left crushed and confused
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2009-07-25 01:52:58]
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Re: Darryl
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by parkourgee on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 04:30:53 AM AEST
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This is honest and simple. You genuinely portray your feelings. I really liked it. But you could have
elaborated and put a rhyming scheme in.
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Re: Darryl
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 07:03:25 PM AEST
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I certainly know what this feels like.
Sad but good work.
Hang tuff, girl.
luv you,
emy |
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