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Maybe
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Teasing torture tempts;
"maybe" spinelessly misleads.
vague, vapour disguise
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-07-24 20:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Maybe
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 09:27:18 AM AEST (User
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A nice haiku, the final line was excellent.
-phil |
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