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Someday Beloved
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 08:07:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sometimes, I believe it doesn’t exist
because I don’t really know what it is.
If I did, I’d tell it to you with a kiss.
If we find it, we can define it together.
There just might be something about it
or rather something about you and me.
So let’s add our names onto its list.
I heard it can cause a lot of heartache,
but that’s a risk I’m willing to take,
and I mean you absolutely no harm.
Even if there’s no such thing as “falling in love,”
I just want you to fall right into my open arms.
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Ambivalence
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2009-07-24 20:07:23]
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Re: Someday Beloved
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by bubkin on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 05:28:44 PM AEST
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| this is amazing ! its like you are speaking right to me ! |
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Re: Someday Beloved
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by elle on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:14:06 PM AEST
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| a lovely sentiment. . . I really love the ending :) elle |
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Re: Someday Beloved
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by moxie on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:41:41 PM AEST
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| Yes, my poetic friend, I can relate more than my meager words can say. |
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Re: Someday Beloved
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by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 07:02:11 AM AEST
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"If we find it, we can define it together"
What a lovely line.
Your words work well together.
Has the spirit of "Cole Porter" .
( how grand is that ! ) |
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Re: Someday Beloved
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by colinb on
Friday, 1st February 2013 @ 10:33:21 PM AEST
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| This is so beautifull I especially love the last 2 lines |
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