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Goodnight
Contributed by
CursedKiss
on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 06:38:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Goodnight
A druken night but words held true
Leading to exaggerated actions
Two young vulnerable hearts meet
Both tainted with different malice's
One pleads for the kiss of the raven
And the other is working towards it
Neither knew just how deep in water
The other one wade
Love was thrust upon them both
And not discreetly at that
Guilt constrained their emotions
And bound them only to affair
She had fallen for him completely
Giving even the shirt off her back
He held onto a painful pleasure
Oppressing the only one who cared
Falling deeper into dismay
Crying rivers red but never tears
She wove herself knew scars
Each one telling of her vibrant pain
He told her of his affection
Towards her and another as well
Culpability eating at him
Like a vulture upon the deceased
Both possessive over one another
Yet they had no right at all
She was more tolerant
But silence says so much more
The days went on and go no better
Sorrow simulated behind forged bliss
The ease misjudged and transient
Thier confusion only rising
Assuring adoration to two
He tells the same story twice
Yet the truth can only lie
Within one fable
Knowing all along
She plays the hand; inteneded ignorance
If only to delay her heart
This one last defeat
Never occuring to him
Games arent fun for all the players
Winners are never labeled sore
For they dont know the feeling
Beggining to move past
Starting to forget it all
Trying to act with just
But who determines right from wrong
Then the tables were turned
Or so he thought
Accusations filled the air
No one ever left room for concern
A girls who's innocence
Pierced the eyes of gods angels
Felt the sorrow of the world
Inflicted by her own undeniable shame
You could call it Romeo and Juliet
However it was a twisted version
For Juliet died but not for love
And her Romeo followed but not for her
Without realization of it
Both had been faced with the question
Of whether to give your heart to
Who loves you, or rather who you love
A twisted love triangle of suicides
A borderline of disorder
A Juliet and A Romeo kissed the blade
Forever together, forever goodnight.
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CursedKiss
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2009-07-24 18:38:35]
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Re: Goodnight
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by elle on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 08:08:00 PM AEST
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A beautifully painful write. I especially respond to the fifth stanza as this relates to
someone in my life who was both delicate & extreme. Nicely done :) elle |
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