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Untitled
Contributed by
Shuberth
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Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:29:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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They say love is cheap love is free
Yes my friend I agree
When I came in her life my heart filled with glee
It’s a feeling that doesn’t cost any fee.
I was mad about her and I forgot to see
Nothing mattered to me but “She”
Day and night I dreamt of no one but “we”
Never knowing one day it will all flee
As time moved on some things changed completely
Thought I would get married & I dreamt of being three
Of course she’ll marry, and start a family
Yea, but not with me
Her husband I won’t be.
© Shuberth Dias
email: shuberth@rediffmail.com
Copyright ©
Shuberth
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2009-07-24 15:29:08]
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Re: Untitled
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:43:56 PM AEST
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I'm sorry things didn't work out the way you hoped...but hang in there..some day, you will be 'three'
Welcome to YPDC..Hope you enjoy it here..
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Re: Untitled
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 04:00:45 PM AEST
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A sad write this is indeed, but very well done just the same. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Untitled
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by bubkin on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 05:29:01 PM AEST
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| very sad , but a great piece |
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