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monolithic mind
Contributed by
elle
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Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 02:30:42 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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I seek awareness. . .
not condemnation. . . & yet
my inner sky weeps
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-07-24 14:30:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: monolithic mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:35:18 PM AEST (User
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Some majestic imagery as always.
-phil |
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Re: monolithic mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:39:16 PM AEST (User
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Another thought provoking write Elle. Great job.
Deadwriter
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Re: monolithic mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 09:17:22 PM AEST (User
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One of my favs,,,great read. |
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Re: monolithic mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 12:00:44 AM AEST (User
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Karma finds the fiend
Dealing him his final blow
For causing you pain |
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