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End of Winter
Contributed by
FragileStrength
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Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 12:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The sunny days have departed
as raw evenings begin to arrive.
The first real flirtations with winter
lets us know she is alive.
A hard rain the night before
tearing leaves away from their lovers.
Now the trees are underdressed
without their spouse they have no cover.
The bone-chilling air
rapes the flowers in the field.
They are suffocated by a thick sheet
yet winter never seems to yeild.
The first sign of snow
leaves us reeling with a sense of peace.
But it soon turns into agony
when the snow continues, unable to cease.
There is a threat ready to strike
lurking beneath a cloudy vase,
with a deceiving diamond-like appearance
but strength enough to freeze us in place.
A breath of fresh air is upon us,
with the promise to reunite the lover and leaves.
Spring is resurrecting the beauty in life,
bringing winter to its knees.
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FragileStrength
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2009-07-24 12:29:22]
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Re: End of Winter
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:59:05 PM AEST
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This is great writing. Some marvellous metaphors graced by an angelic fluency. Superb.
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Re: End of Winter
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by MorguesMatter on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:09:22 PM AEST
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| Seasons come and seasons go, you've captured the moment like a beautiful photo, worthy of a thousand words and gracefully so. a brilliant interpretation-Morgues |
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