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Think of Me
Contributed by
Cathi
on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 02:49:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You look at me
Like I do sometimes
The idiot beginning
In your eyes and
Blemishing your whole:
Progressive pollution
Until you are invaded
And it is all I am to you
And all I will be
And all you can think.
Copyright ©
Cathi
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2009-07-23 02:49:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Think of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 05:36:13 AM AEST (User
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I liked this, you used some good language.
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Re: Think of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 10:34:22 AM AEST (User
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I second the comment.
Short and sweet but still has a power to it with the words you chose
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