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Hide & Seek- reminiscence of childhood
Contributed by
PlainBittersweet
on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 04:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Ten seconds
A house full of possibilities
Fighting the urge to make a noise
Competing over the best spots
Eight seconds
Making last changes on where to hide
Holding your hand over your mouth
to muffle your excitement
Five seconds
Trying to hold your breath
Closing your eyes
Wondering if your picked to best place
Two seconds
You can hear others failing at staying calm
Squeals from the younger escape their lips
Followed by "Shh" from the older kids
Then the dreaded...
"Ready or Not Here I Come"
Then the Moment of truth...Will you be found?
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PlainBittersweet
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2009-07-22 16:08:50]
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Re: Hide & Seek- reminiscence of childhood
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 07:15:11 PM AEST
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lol... this is cute. Thank you for an enjoyable read. It brought back memories.
Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Hide & Seek- reminiscence of childhood
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 08:31:07 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It reminds me of many times I played hide and seek as a child. Great job!
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