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Iron Maiden
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PhantomsLDY
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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A heart of steel
A body of iron
Is this what you see?
Well, an iron maiden maybe so
Life has given me little reason to be otherwise
I have suffered unsurmountable pain
I have cried rivers in the rain
My heart has been wrung almost dry
I have no tears left to cry
I am numb to the pain
I have been put to the test
I came out on the other side better than the best
My heart was melted by the love of another
He is like no other
The iron maiden is there for others to see
He is the only one close enough to see the tender side of me
Our love is strong and tested to be true
What's wrong?
Are you jealous it isn't you?
A heart of steel
A body of iron
Is this what you see?
The iron maiden for you I will be.
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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| Incredible poem ... very, very good write. |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 05:51:45 PM AEST
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| this is great, sometimes family just needs to butt out lol, i've some like that too, *growls* this is great btw:) huggs n' love to you n' yours, always nessa |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by karoody on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:03:37 AM AEST
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| Tracie- I loved this write. Your emotions were felt and your message strong. |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:24:13 AM AEST
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That was cool, babe, what else can I say. Great poem.
The Phantom |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 02:19:39 AM AEST
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It's a tough old world.
You have to be strong
If you don't learn that
y'won't last long
great write |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:22:48 PM AEST
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| i understand cexactly what you feel tracie,your poem is so clear and wonderful and your hert is within the words.you r an iron maiden with a tender heart that`s why we love |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 11:46:17 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem. I also have members of my family that think they have me all figured out. When they really couldn't be more wrong. One of my cousin said that I have a heart of ice, because when ever some thing horible happens I never show any emotion.. When what it really is with me is that I do not like to show my emotions to every body. If I am going to cry I would much rather do it alone. I really have a very tender heart I just choose not to let others see it, because with one of my ex boyfriend when every I would cry he would call me weak and hit me. So I learned not to show my emotions to any body. I really do have to work on being able to show my emotions better, but I know that it will take some time. Once again this is a wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:03:13 AM AEST
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| Dear PhantomsLDY, I call it survival. I've had a relative that I believe exaggerated her emo-tions to appear loving. That same person also belittled me as being too touchy when my feelings were hurt and I'd cry. She was a 'crazy-maker.' Sometimes she would say that I must have PMS and hormones were making me over-react! EEEEEK! I learned to get hard and nasty in front of her. Then, I was 'hard' and unfeeling, she said. With some people, you don't win. Friend Bizzy |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:40:38 PM AEST
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| Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it so much!!! |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:42:52 PM AEST
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| I just wish they would learn when to quit bugging me and live their own lives. |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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| Thanks Kara I'm glad you liked it. |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:45:15 PM AEST
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| Thanks Babe!!! |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:46:53 PM AEST
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| I completely agree! |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:47:55 PM AEST
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| Thanks Dean!!! |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:50:23 PM AEST
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| I am sorry to know that someone made you hide your emotions like that and hopefully someone will come along that will make you feel safe enough to show them again. |
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Re: Iron Maiden
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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| I agree that you can never please some people. |
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