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Girls, Sounds and Colours

Contributed by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 06:26:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A 70's tune plays along,
a mind enters a parallel universe,
the tune evolves into a song,
and his visited by a sexy nurse

She injects music into his soul,
a auto-tuned voice starts to flow,
his mind tangles in a blissful hold,
Lights shine down, and sounds begin to show

Colours and lights cloud his vision,
while his bones move to a harmonious tune,
reality and fiction enter a collision,
launching him into an unfamiliar june

The street lights joyfully dance and sway,
a stringed rainbow appears at his feet,
beautiful girls vibing through day,
lighting a path toward this magical beat

The musical sky vibrates at his feet,
angels rainy kisses fill his beatless soul,
an angel's voice rides the beat,
a sonic boom as his soul escapes the cold

a harp provides the sweetest melody,
heart fueled by angel wings he glides,
he smiles like villans escaping treachery,
into the music his soul collides

He wakes to a familiar june,
his saviour cloacked within this harmonious tune,
it now coarses through every fibre,
an angel's kiss...the magical reviver.

Copyright © Daylynn_Van_Wyk ... [ 2009-07-20 06:26:19]
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Re: Girls, Sounds and Colours (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 04:27:29 PM AEST
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Quite cheery, I like it! The use of punctuation is quite abstract but fits the context quite nicely :)

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