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Chocolate-Filled Deceit
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 19th July 2009 @ 10:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Sinful chocolate,
sugar-coating your mistakes,
Each piece decays love.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-19 22:08:49]
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Re: Chocolate-Filled Deceit
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 19th July 2009 @ 11:43:46 PM AEST
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Hands you chocolates
thinks there's something weird about him
but no the chocolates are so good
very good poem
I liked it
hope to read more soon
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Re: Chocolate-Filled Deceit
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 09:35:32 AM AEST
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A very good write, but there are a lot of us who are covering things up, just like to do nice things like that.
Deadwriter
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Re: Chocolate-Filled Deceit
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 12:29:31 PM AEST
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Fantastic. It's all about guilt and very little about actual affection or adoration. Top quality poetry.
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