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A Moment in Slow Motion
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 07:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The mind lags behind;
dark thoughts weigh down the clock's hands.
Fear freeze-frames all time.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-18 19:41:26]
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Re: A Moment in Slow Motion
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 08:39:51 PM AEST
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very true,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Moment in Slow Motion
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 09:25:06 PM AEST
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| this is great! i can never write haikus that make sense haha :) so very impressive!!! :D |
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Re: A Moment in Slow Motion
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th July 2009 @ 05:18:59 AM AEST
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a highly absorbing haiku.
-phil |
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