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Candle Wax
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 01:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Burning candles live;
the wax is the candle's blood.
dripping to its death
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-18 13:51:44]
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Re: Candle Wax
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 11:50:46 PM AEST
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Candles are quite fascinating in their own little way.
Personally, I can watch a candle burn for a long time. Just watching the flame and the melting wax drip down...
Short. I like it. Good job(:
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Re: Candle Wax
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 07:44:11 PM AEST
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| beautiful analogy |
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