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A fitting end
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 11:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You are there and I am here
the only thing that I do care
you'll only see a half of me
the only half I let you see
what now is fair for you to care
that I am here and you are there
tis all I see .... you show to me
is all I'll ever see of thee
For when this venue, it will end
the masses scattered into the wind
all to go their separate way
in hope to find a place to stay
and find they will, this place live
with all new friends, to purpose give
bestow to thee and all of these
a lasting place, eternal peace
So from thy lips say no goodbyes
no saddened faces, nor teary eyes
the only thing my friends to tell
a loving smile and a soft farewell
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UnknownLegend
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2009-07-18 11:49:15]
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Re: A fitting end
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 03:19:28 PM AEST
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David,
a beautiful and fitting write.
It is hard to lose touch, it seems it happens
more often than not these days, with net friends and in the real world.
I hope you stay, I have missed ya.
Hugs
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Re: A fitting end
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th July 2009 @ 04:59:58 AM AEST
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a biting poem, it certainly makes you think.
-phil |
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Re: A fitting end
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by Sbhottie288 on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 09:46:54 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem... |
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