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Black Mist
Contributed by
dinadarkwaters
on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 09:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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As you walk along the road
And the black mist passes you
It becomes dark
Your mind blank
You get scared
Yet you keep walking
But it just gets darker
Then a light
It gets closer then its gone
Gone forever
You never see light again
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2009-07-17 21:54:01]
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Re: Black Mist
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 07:29:17 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Interesting poem and quite true.
--Heidi |
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Re: Black Mist
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by Cathi on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 03:07:01 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling! This poem is very cold and beautiful - I can both see and feel the darkness. |
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