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Trapped in a Crystal Ball
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 07:27:29 AM in AEST
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Confining confusion encircles me,
surrounded by potential dreams that are as far away as moonbeams.
The mystical ball is destined to tell all and has stolen my serenity;
If only I could esape this spherical abyss stealing my dreams.
The reflective crystal projects my life at varying angles;
it is torture being trapped in a crystal web of wishes that cannot come true.
Idly, all I can do is exist and watch the reflections of my tuture fade into transparent dangles;
If only someone could release me by breaking the crystal ball fully through.
Until then, here inside this mystical crystal I remain;
I realize now dreams are nothing if they are trapped inside.
Cluttered potential rattles through my brain;
This crystal ball is where my hopes and dreams reside.
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2009-07-17 07:27:29]
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Re: Trapped in a Crystal Ball
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 07:55:03 AM AEST
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This is indeed a unique piece. Very well done. Glad you posted it.
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Re: Trapped in a Crystal Ball
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by eeeitak on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 09:03:52 PM AEST
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This is so cool.
Not only is it an awesome idea, but the writing itself is beautiful.
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