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DREAMING OF YOU

Contributed by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 12:51:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I lay in my spaceship upon mars,
watching you from distant stars

Red and barren is this Mars'y plain,
A place where ocean's and mythological seas,
my tears dried as dying trees

The atmosphere is near poisonous,
consuming me with every breathe,
from a blossom to a leafless death

My body is wieghtless,
floating across this barren land,
Every sight lost within distasteful red,
and beyond shut eyes i smile in my head

How I loath the sight of red,
yet im at the doorstep to paradise,
a place in time not known to my martian eyes

a paradise where green is abundant,
where harmonious melodies dance with sound,
my heart rejuvenated with this bliss i've found

every breathe feeds my soul,
replenishing a stranger from a distant plain,
a smile escapes at the feel of this magical rain

a kiss from an angel,
renders me blushy and shy,
a rose now blossoms in the sun,
through a hole in the fenced sky

This is the perfect moment above every desire,
and i wish to remain forever,
in this dream of a girl i truely admire.

Copyright © Daylynn_Van_Wyk ... [ 2009-07-16 12:51:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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