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Broken Sonnet.
Contributed by
hopelezz
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Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 08:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Now that I admit,
in this world we always bind.
I really love you as I admit,
sharing words that I couldn't find.
Missing you day by day,
all my words is always you.
Tonight, I live my fears behind,
living it all no longs of line.
Because tonight I will be right at your side.
Holding our hands together we ride.
But now still I see tears from your eyes,
from all the worthies undone and sacred lies.
Letting you go is so painful to do,
but maybe I'm just not the only one for you.
Copyright ©
hopelezz
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2009-07-15 20:56:52]
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Re: Broken Sonnet.
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 09:54:51 PM AEST
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| Nicely written, very full of emotion. |
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Re: Broken Sonnet.
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 12:38:30 PM AEST
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| I love it:) |
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Re: Broken Sonnet.
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by Lele on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 01:14:50 PM AEST
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As says the meaning sonnet (comes from italian word sonneto, that is small sound). This poem isn't a sonnet (in structure terms), but it's a song, contenting a emotional and catching music in its verses (especially the rimes) .
Congratulations,
Leandro Monteiro |
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