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The Art of Swinging
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 01:43:54 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Outstretching my legs,
soaring to the cloud-filled sky,
flying with no cares
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-15 13:43:54]
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Re: The Art of Swinging
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 03:06:09 PM AEST
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| This is a really good haiku. It really captured the memory! |
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Re: The Art of Swinging
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 03:40:33 PM AEST
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Awww in addition to beautifully depicting the art of swinging, you have managed to evoke some great momories for me, both on a swing and on a "merry-go-round" my Dad made for us.
Thank you, Heidi
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Re: The Art of Swinging
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 04:43:11 PM AEST
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Ah, nice. You have captured that feeling of nostalgia very well in this short little haiku.
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Re: The Art of Swinging
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 08:34:37 PM AEST
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This is dreamy and perfect.
You just sent me back to swinging, Infact I do it still today every chance I get. Though nothing beats the old tire swing, or the swing that went off over the water either!
Thanks for the smiles
Michelle |
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