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our song
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 10:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I to you
you to I. . .
pledge maxium
hold to this truth. . .
no matter
at the passing waifs
or commodores
false deluge
no claim to ever after
no lust for holding on
yet simple pleasure
when my name
resounds, forth
from your tongue. . .
only pleasure
precious knowing
how we two belong
I to you
& you to I. . .
long wed in ode
shared voice, betrothed
eternal lifts our song. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-07-15 10:14:59]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: our song
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 04:38:21 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. What more can I say? |
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Re: our song
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by hopelezz on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 08:34:54 PM AEST
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wow.. simple poem but the meaning was so special..
kip it up...
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Re: our song
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 01:05:49 PM AEST
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| I dig it;) |
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