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Unconditional Love
Contributed by
anna
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm so sweet to you,
Full of thoughtfull gestures
But all you do is throw it back in my face
All you did was pester.
I told you the time wasn't right
But you wouldn't have it, you had to fight
You hurt me, upset me, you were so cruel
Attacking me verbally, so viciously
You said you dont like me
When all I do is love you
so much for you I sacrifice too
And to hear you say something like that
Breaks my heart, such a vicious attack
When all I do is think of ways
To cheer you up on those rainy days
To keep you smiling when you're blue
Cos I am completely in love with you
But you don't seem to understand
Why I wouldn't give in to your demand
You didn't think that my gesture was sweet
I wasn't going to have yet another defeat
You only cared bout what you would get
Not at all bout the thought, you constantly would threat.
I know you will apologise and get angry at urself,
That's what you always seem to do
Once you've realised you were wrong,
You'll be all sweet and loving, maybe sing me a little song.
And me bein the fool that I am
I forgive you everytime
For I am utterly in love with you
My soul sings with yours a pretty little rhyme.
I will still love you
No matter how much you hurt me
I'll forgive and forget too
For I love you unconditionally
Copyright ©
anna
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2003-03-29 10:35:00]
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Re: Unconditional Love
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by karoody on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 11:25:06 AM AEST
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| very emotional write. i see how your heart hurts. good luck to you, hope things look up for you soon |
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Re: Unconditional Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 06:22:32 PM AEST
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| He sounds bipolar to me, be careful, i loved a man like that and in the end there was nothing but a heart full of hurt. Took me a long time to get over it. The write is very good. The emotional pleas are heartwrenching. |
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Re: Unconditional Love
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by Ivy on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 07:26:27 PM AEST
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| nice write. Ivy |
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Re: Unconditional Love
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by Apartment213 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:45:51 PM AEST
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| very good poem, i bet things will get better. keep writing, and smile! |
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