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To Mom and Dad
Contributed by
tin
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Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 03:03:15 AM in AEST
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I'm not the son i would like to be,
but i'm trying as hard as i can,
i can't blame any of my faults,
on anyone but my self,
but i hope you know you're responsible,
for all the good in me,
you probably don't realise that you've kept me afloat,
through my hadest times,
ordeals i was too scared to confess to you,
times when you could see my pain but not where it was coming from,
you stood like unshakable pillars for me to hold tight to,
few really know me but you know me better than most,
I just hope you know me well enough to realise how thankful i am.
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tin
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2009-07-13 03:03:15]
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Re: To Mom and Dad
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by Kellros on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 04:32:14 AM AEST
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Psalm 86:5
"For You, Lord, are good, and ready to forgive,And abundant in loving kindness to all who call upon You."
There is no way to show appreciation like just saying it!
I enjoyed the emotion in this poem, showed me again that sometimes great things happen and you forget to give thanks where it is due!
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Re: To Mom and Dad
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 09:45:30 AM AEST
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Great poem. You should definitely show it to your parents. Amazing write. You have so much sincerity in this piece. This will make your parents proud!
--Heidi |
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