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Wash away my life
Contributed by
winniss
on
Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 06:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Shadow on stone, oh how you have grown.
Absorbing feelings as you roam.
Held within a darkness, forever alone.
Your reflection so earthly, it's never very far.
Your spirit so distant it caresses every star.
Copyright ©
winniss
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2009-07-11 18:37:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wash away my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 07:09:36 PM AEST (User
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Captured by what at first seems a very simplistic style I find my self trapped in the depth of your words. Short and to the point and so much meaning to each line. Wonderfully written piece.
Peace
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Re: Wash away my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by ScaramangaSilk on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 05:00:36 AM AEST (User
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Nice visuals |
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