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Purposeful Puddle
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 01:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Splish, splash sopping wet,
adults wash away their age.
the puddle of youth
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-10 13:50:04]
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Re: Purposeful Puddle
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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I remember when I used to play in puddles I would splash my mom at first she would be mad but then she'd laugh.
great poem
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Purposeful Puddle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 04:11:46 PM AEST
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A lovely little rhyme. good stuff.
-Phil |
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Re: Purposeful Puddle
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 06:18:05 PM AEST
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| this is a very sweet poem. i really like this one. |
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