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Rainbow
Contributed by
thewizard
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Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 01:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Kaleidoscopic colours
Arched gateways, in the skies
Cast shadows on hillsides
Such beauty, to the eyes
Arches of colour
We all seek to hold
At the end, of each rainbow
The elusive, pot of gold
The suns rays reflect
Through droplets of rain
As if like magic
They appear again
The arch in the sky
Kaleidoscope heights
A pleasure to the eye
Natures creative lights
Copyright ©
thewizard
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2009-07-10 13:02:20]
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Re: Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 05:14:21 PM AEST
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You painted the images extremely well with some fabulous language.
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Re: Rainbow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 12:29:56 AM AEST
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I see it! Awwwwww very pretty write indeed.
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Re: Rainbow
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 05:19:32 PM AEST
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great imagery and a wonderful concept, i love the rainbows and always have, you captured it wonderfully with great poetry!!
you may like my poem on the rainbow!
feel free to check it out!
great right! |
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Re: Rainbow
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by manbeast on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 08:48:47 PM AEST
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| unique take, nice |
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