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The Gray Rose
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 09:27:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The gray rose remains alone knowing it will never feel at home;
shifting and drifting in the breeze, colorless petals dismally dance.
An overcast alien enveloped by the colorful blossoms like a stone.
Sadly, the gray rose's inner beauty was not given a glance.
Roses are living beings of color;
this lone rose cannot conform to a regular rose.
It must dangle in the wind and exist like no other;
the mere gray keeps it from ever feeling close.
One day the gray rose awakens to the sun;
it spots a girl in gray coming its way.
She looks down and knows this is the one;
The gray girl picked the gray rose and dissolved the dismay.
Both gray beings felt almost alive that day;
for, they had been amongst the living for many years;
Without each other, alone they would have to stay;
now the two spirits can cry joyful tears.
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2009-07-09 21:27:29]
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Re: The Gray Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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I like this. Nice little story with a great message. The pretty roses with colors aren't always the ones I'd pick for their inner thorns often out shine their outer beauty.
Take care and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: The Gray Rose
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 06:09:32 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this right now. l can understand this poem when im in that mood. keep it up. |
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