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Sans Peur (In Absentia)
Contributed by
stufrey
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Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 03:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Reason's disavowal,
Discarding pick and trowl,
Nails tipped with lint,
The manic man churns the sodden earth in the hallway,
Looking for worms, a relapse, a
Stint.
His figure hunched,
On maggots he supped and lunched,
These insects squirm in the synapses,
Bring about questions, relapses.
In his retina the little man's upsetting her,
Mother, Earth doth provide another absentia, Brother.
Motes do allow torpor,
Sleights off hand,
Chemical inbalances demand,
The millimetric movement of a id-like hand.
Skulls fade with shifting pupils,
Ink-laden doom does spill,
A half-empty glass of stain-sure milk,
Of brethren, of perennial brotherhood,
Ilk.
A Klimt Judith haunts the essence of this very poem.
Memorial sown.
Copyright ©
stufrey
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2009-07-09 15:46:25]
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Re: Sans Peur (In Absentia)
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 06:39:32 PM AEST
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The title got my attention. "Without fear" is quite the interesting poem. The images come before me in my mind. Very vivid use of the language of portray a crazed state of mind. Great poem!
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Re: Sans Peur (In Absentia)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 04:43:30 PM AEST
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Some great, unique language use.
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Re: Sans Peur (In Absentia)
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by elle on
Monday, 20th July 2009 @ 09:54:34 PM AEST
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| Intriguing, thought provoking write. . . nicely done. elle |
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