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No, never
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 06:39:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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You see me
but never me
voices to hush, to speak over, to soothe
and hands to pull, to reach for, to cling to
Black raindrops
splatter the canvas and tabletops
your artist fingers
feel right through me
and my poet mind
sees beauty amongst the destruction
but sometimes
words fail me
and I am left speechless
in the ruins you created
hollow body and vacant eyes
I grow colder
the candle flame bolder
you become ill
with concoctions and poison
my warnings lost on you
You don't hear me
never me.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-07-08 06:39:49]
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Re: No, never
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 02:44:00 PM AEST
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very good indeed. you conveyed the feeling of not being seen perfectly.
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Re: No, never
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 09:11:42 PM AEST
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Great poem. Very effective!
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