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Milk and Honey
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 06:35:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The woman who smells of milk and honey
and wears a tiger lily in her hair
She feels unnatural, surreal
painted down among the lavender and violets
She braids her dark brown locks loosely
and walks unafraid by the riverside
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Voices in her head turn over thoughts
like rocks under the current
revealing nostalgia and damage
She kisses flower petals
and the delicacy of it,
makes her cry.
Do you see me?
Do you see me?
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-07-08 06:35:23]
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Re: Milk and Honey
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 07:14:04 AM AEST
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| Sorry but no! I do not see her |
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Re: Milk and Honey
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 02:58:32 PM AEST
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Well constructed metaphors and again, some spellbinding imagery.
-phil |
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Re: Milk and Honey
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 12:09:51 PM AEST
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| very pretty...thanks for sharing |
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