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Systematic overload
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 12:10:06 AM in AEST
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Before anyone points it out to me I think glimce is a typo but I have no idea how to spell it and neither does my spell check
Systematic overload
All senses fail, rupture in the brain
You’d go insane
Just think if you knew everything
Every little detail
Your systems would fail
Overload from to much info
Because there are something’s we don’t need to know
I would gladly go insane
Just for a glimpse or a simple peek show
I would gladly rupture my brain
Go insane have a systematic overload
Just so I could know
The answers to it all
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-07-08 00:10:06]
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Re: Systematic overload
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 08:05:40 AM AEST
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Kelly,
I think the answer is "Glimpse"
I know because I did know everything that one moment of salubrious rejoice. Just don't ask me to repeat it, its lost. Perhaps I did go insane to forget that brief moment of sanity..... Perhaps.
I like the way you expressed your points, desires, thoughts.....
Keep writing
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Re: Systematic overload
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 08:00:19 PM AEST
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Awesome write. I don't think I would ever want to know it all even for a second. The mysteries keep humans on their toes searching for answers and make life exciting. I love this write. It truly got me thinking. Awesome as always!
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Re: Systematic overload
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 04:52:14 AM AEST
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Good work, good language choice.
-Phil
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