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Indigo Moon
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 12:27:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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She painted a star on her breast
indigo ink on her milky skin
Her hair an oil spill, your thrill
and through the rain,
sweet indigo bled
dramatic tears across her flesh
She stood to the wind
impervious, illuminated
Eyes twinkling wildly
Her hourglass,
filled with time
could not stop the clocks
His voice, charismatic and rough
sent shivers down her
she could sense him in the air
feel his fire
creeping up her thighs
radiating warmth and light
They spoke in whispers
imperceptible along the wind
fingers entwined, he bathed her
in his moonlight
Shivers of ecstasy
like stars scattered in the sky
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2009-07-07 12:27:00]
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Re: Indigo Moon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 05:08:08 PM AEST
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| Nice! |
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Re: Indigo Moon
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by Pebbles345 on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 12:04:14 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful imagery.. i like it. |
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Re: Indigo Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 03:13:23 PM AEST
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One of your finest. It was so sensual and intense. Wonderful.
-Phil
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Re: Indigo Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th September 2013 @ 12:17:01 AM AEST
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I can not believe I left a comment that only said nice. I should be smacked. My only excuse (or summation) is that I was so blown away by this poem that night of July 7, 2009, that I was speechless.
This poem, simply put, is beautiful and amazing with a wonderful touch of sensuality!
Thank you. |
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