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~In My Dreams Last Night~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 10:37:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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~~xXx~~
In my dreams last night,
You were so close to me.
I felt your body next to mine
And all was as it should be.
In my dreams last night,
I felt your lips on mine...
Your tongue danced upon my own,
It felt oh, so divine.
In my dreams last night,
Your fingers caressed my skin.
Your tongue then started roaming,
Ooohh. and I started moaning.
In my dreams last night,
I tasted you so sweet.
I wished the day would come
That we would really meet...
In my dreams last night,
we made such sweet love.
You pleased me in so many ways,
It surely was a blessing from above.
~~xXx~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2009-07-07 10:37:13]
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 11:17:22 AM AEST
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Sounds like a super dream Jen, ooooo so steamy ! Well written but non can expect anything less with your writing!
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 05:11:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent. |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 08:52:12 PM AEST
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I'm sure you will never forget this dream! If only I could have such dreams. Great poem!
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 10:49:36 PM AEST
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Caefull what you dream, girlfriend.
Dreams do come true.
good dream, awesome write,
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 07:26:25 AM AEST
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"Dream dream dream when I want you in my arms whenever I need you all I have to do is dream" Dream dream dream dream dream.
They can be real |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 05:32:28 AM AEST
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I'm guessing that is one dream that you didn't want to end !!!
Lovely weave of words again
Steve |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 08:14:45 AM AEST
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Another write that sets one on fire. Beautiful my friend.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by Shuberth on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 04:49:04 PM AEST
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love it all the way. i think you're gonna be my next fav poets :)
Shuberth |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by moxie on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 07:25:38 PM AEST
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| Hi... We don't know one another except through the words we put here... All I can say is that once upon a time I had a woman that felt that way about me... Whomever has captured your soul has been blessed. |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by Kyva on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 08:34:35 AM AEST
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A lovely write. That certainly would be a dream that one wishes to live within and not wake from. It is wonderful how our dreams can form words on our tongue that are then written as pieces such as this one here.
Wonderful write. |
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Re: ~In My Dreams Last Night~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 09:37:51 PM AEST
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ever the dreamer, you have done it again! do unlighted
candles melt by your bedside jenni girl? love your poetry!
hugs n' love nessa |
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