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Tears make a shower wetter.
Contributed by
jessilini
on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 10:12:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Alone in my shower
Water pouring on my back
Not washing my hair
Or anything like that
Alone in my shower
Always the same
Tears in the shower
It's pretty lame
Crying in my shower
I don't know why
Crying in my shower
I just can't smile
Alone in my shower
Shampoo stings my eyes
Not paying attention
Not very wise
Alone in my shower
My fingers have pruned
I can't think straight
I'm not in tune
All this steam
Is clouding my veiw
Been in here too long
I'll have to get out soon
Copyright ©
jessilini
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2009-07-07 10:12:17]
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Re: Tears make a shower wetter.
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by jessb3 on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 07:07:04 PM AEST
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| I know all too well how this feels and it's nice to know that I'm not the only one that has cried in the shower. Great write! |
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Re: Tears make a shower wetter.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 05:19:38 AM AEST
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This is very good. It's actually quite witty for a poem about a depressing subject. I'll be looking out for your next write.
-Phil |
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