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Cupid's Dulling Arrow
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 12:07:39 PM in AEST
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Cupid's wound mends fast;
the once piercing arrow dulls,
leaving a faint scar
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-06 12:07:39]
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Re: Cupid's Dulling Arrow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 12:13:49 PM AEST
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The problmm with Cupid though, is he's always got a new sharp arrow. I want to slap him sometimes.
Nice Haiku.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Cupid's Dulling Arrow
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by sometime_around_midnight on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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| i liked this alot i didnt want it to end, have you thought about making a long one out of it. I think it would be interesting and i would love to see what you would do with it. thanks for sharing |
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Re: Cupid's Dulling Arrow
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by silent on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 06:49:26 AM AEST
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| Great haiku...I wish my wounds would heal fast and leave a faint scar but i suppose it depends on the timeline. Anyway nice one |
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