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Stepped On
Contributed by
dillybar
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Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 08:19:37 PM in AEST
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I'm trampled on
As if I'm burning in flames,
I'm stepped on,
Like an ant on a sidewalk.
Finally, lava and magma
Run through my veins,
Trying to reach its peak,
And is about to burst
Like a volcano.
So call me stupid,
Call me dumb,
Thats it. enough!
I'm done,
I'm so sick
Of being called a worthless bum.
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dillybar
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2009-07-05 20:19:37]
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Re: Stepped On
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 09:09:10 PM AEST
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I love this poem. I am a nice person also that many people take advantage of. Nice similes. I hope your friends start appreciating you. Great poem!
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Re: Stepped On
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 10:53:26 PM AEST
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This is a good write.
I understand how you feel, I've been taken advantage of and put down a lot also.
I, as well, hope that people start to appreciate you more.
Hope all is well
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