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When I think of you.
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 02:53:50 PM in AEST
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When I think of you
I don’t think of lust or sexuality,
Though that is part of what may attract me.
When I think of you
I don’t think of wit or intelligence,
Though that is part of what draws me hence.
When I think of you
I don’t think of care, hope or charm,
Nor do I see you as something handsome on my arm.
When I think of the one
I just wish I could hold,
I can’t go to sleep,
I don’t want to let go.
Because then the fear takes over,
Of what daybreak may bring:
The truth, you not here, or worse:
You, but a dream.
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Re: When I think of you.
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 09:16:04 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece of writing! Great flow. Very emotional piece.
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Re: When I think of you.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:43:30 AM AEST
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Yes, very emotional indeed. Maybe every love you have is part reality, part dream. Maybe the soul itself is just a dream, dreamt up by poets and artists. Still, I'd rather take the dream.
-Phil
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