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Traveling Teardrop
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 12:26:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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cascading sorrow,
flowing from a life of pain,
searching for a home
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-07-04 00:26:32]
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Re: Traveling Teardrop
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 06:03:19 AM AEST
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I feel this one...
very good...almost melodic...
Keep it up!
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Re: Traveling Teardrop
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 06:41:48 AM AEST
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| *applauds* |
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Re: Traveling Teardrop
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 08:06:52 AM AEST
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Hope you get to feeling better.
I know how this can be.
Good job.
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Re: Traveling Teardrop
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 09:50:59 AM AEST
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Excellent imagery in this one....
Hope you get over your depression soon..
Hugs
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Re: Traveling Teardrop
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by shelby on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 11:16:08 AM AEST
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painfully beautiful.
I am sorry that you are so sad, chin up the sun is out! I know easier said than done sometimes but I am hugging ya right now!
Michelle |
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