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Scatter My Ashes
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 3rd July 2009 @ 08:10:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Scatter the ashes, I need them no more
Left not but life, which I’ve come to abhor
All there is left, the earth’s left to claim
Cold embrace, of ground whence we came
What there was then, now not shall be
Dreams become ashes, now scattered at sea
Wind ferries awing to the ocean’s calm
It carries those hopes with empty aplomb
Need and want, nor worry no more
Only ashes are left of all I cared for
Who she was and what it meant to me
Sinks slowly to rest at the bottom of the sea
Perhaps one day, they will come back to land
My dreams become a castle built in the sand
Built with the innocence of children at play
Till again it is time to be washed away
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navydocny
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2009-07-03 08:10:44]
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by shelby on
Friday, 3rd July 2009 @ 04:59:12 PM AEST
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Sighhhhh this is beautiful in its sadness.
Flowing like the ocean waves brushing the shore. I hope that you are ok?
Are you back in the States again or still gone?
Happy 4th! Thanks you for what you are doing for us all!
Super hugssssss
Michelle |
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 07:00:35 AM AEST
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| I loved this. Awesome write. I find that since I am challenged in the rhyming arena, I tend to be more fascinated with works like this. |
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 06:56:59 PM AEST
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I've been wondering 'bout you, my friend.
I'm happy to know they aren't scattered you asses literly, right now.
Great to know you're still with us.
Have a great 4th of July.
good writing as always.
huggs, blessings, prayer, stay safe,
emy |
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 06:57:08 PM AEST
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I've been wondering 'bout you, my friend.
I'm happy to know they aren't scattered you asses literly, right now.
Great to know you're still with us.
Have a great 4th of July.
good writing as always.
huggs, blessings, prayer, stay safe,
emy |
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 08:19:18 PM AEST
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Truly amazing poem! It describes the cycle of life and death quite precisely with beautiful word choice. It also reminds me of something Poe might write. Flashes of "Annabel Lee" pop into my mind. I love that poem. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of writing!
---Heidi |
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Re: Scatter My Ashes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 07:40:45 PM AEST
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beautiful expression,
hugs n' love nessa |
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