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Airplane
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
on
Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 12:55:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I were an airplane
Flying high above the city lights
And you opened me like a child's book
You would see me dreaming
Might the words on the page tell you a story
Then you could take those black, bold letters
And build yourself a message
Roll it up and stash it in a bottle
And send it off to sea
It would find it's way to me
Way up in dark blue sky
Dusk would stop to stare
At how the stars would beg the moon
To let me fly down to you
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2009-07-02 00:55:40]
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Re: Airplane
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by secretcelebrity on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 04:30:46 AM AEST
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| You have a real gift with imagery! This is beautiful!! |
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Re: Airplane
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 11:55:36 AM AEST
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You really do have a gift!
I would love to see more.
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Re: Airplane
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:56:50 AM AEST
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This is truly incredible writing. It's intelligent, vivid and beautiful. This bit in particular held my eye:
'Might the words on the page tell you a story
Then you could take those black, bold letters
And build yourself a message'
amazing!
-Phil |
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Re: Airplane
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 11:00:51 AM AEST
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Re-reading this, months later, I've fallen in love all over again! It's such a good poem.
-T_U |
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