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BRIDGE OF FEAR
Contributed by
silent
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Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 08:05:56 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Fear and loneliness
Stand with me gripping the rail
Embracing the fall
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2009-07-01 20:05:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BRIDGE OF FEAR
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 08:41:50 PM AEST (User
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Great haiku! It does convey a great deal of sorrow. I hope you do not truly want to embrace any fall. I am probably not interpreting it correctly. Oh, I think I get it now. You want to jump of the bridge of fear and loneliness meaning you want to get rid of fear and loneliness. Sorry I rambled on and on. I love this haiku! I will look for more of your poetry.
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