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To See the Ocean
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 09:18:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Is the ocean blue?
Will the waves hynotize me?
fantasy for me
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-06-30 21:18:25]
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Re: To See the Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 10:08:09 PM AEST
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| oceans are the best :) |
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Re: To See the Ocean
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 06:51:21 AM AEST
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Very nice write.
Oceans are beautiful, but I prefer the mountains and forests.
Deadwriter
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Re: To See the Ocean
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 12:22:35 PM AEST
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the ocean is incredible, the waves and sounds will mesmorize you. I hope you are able to see it soon.
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Re: To See the Ocean
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 01:42:47 PM AEST
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Hey Heidi,
Yes....it's blue..and green at times...and turquoise....and
Yes...the waves will hypotize you..... and the ocean will provide fantasies for you...
I can't imagine living anywhere else.. If I don't see the ocean for one day, I feel like I;m missing something...
I hope you get to experience the ocean one day...
Lovely Haiku.
Jenni |
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