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~How Can I Say~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 01:55:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~~xXx~~
I tried to write what’s in my heart
But the words refused to flow.
I guess I knew right from the start
My feelings you must never know.
I tried to write of my love for you,
But ink wouldn’t flow through my pen.
And all that I ever said was true .
I’m so happy to be just your friend.
I tried to view me through your eyes
To see how you feel towards me.
Maybe it’s a blessing in disguise,
That you have never let me see.
So how can I say in a poem
What I’m feeling in my heart,
It wouldn’t matter anyway,
Cause we live in worlds far apart.
~~xXx~~
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Jenni_K
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 02:31:14 PM AEST
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| Very good piece of writing. I am sorry the person in this poem is not opening up. Many people can relate to this including me. Great write! |
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by Richard1506 on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 03:28:03 PM AEST
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| Very nice, encapsulating unrequited love. I know how this feels,and it strck home with me. Well done. |
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 03:49:01 PM AEST
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Love is the most difficult simple emotion
that there is...
Sometimes, we have to console ourselves
that we can feel it at all, even if it's
not a love that is in the open or returned.
But it's as I've said...Love chooses us, whether
we will it or not.
Lovely, yet heartbreaking piece, Miss Jenni.
My heart goes out to you.
Be well,
~dawn
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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Ever since I saw Dawn say that: "Love chooses us, whether we will it or not."
I thought, OMG! How true.
So, yeah, it can be tough and you write about those feelings very well in this one. I am sure many of us have been in this position before.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 06:12:26 AM AEST
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A beautiful write. Isn't it amazing how at times when we think we are stumbling for words, they seem to flow into an amazing piece like this.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:18:13 PM AEST
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| Great write!! I can relate to the emotion in this. as im sure many who read will be able to. I really enjoyed this one! |
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:39:49 PM AEST
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| Feelings poetry are those feeling you have a great gift of that keep usin it I know you will. |
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Re: ~How Can I Say~
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 09:20:07 PM AEST
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unrequited love is an ache, unlike your poetry which is
so beautifully penned, keep writing!
hugs n' love nessa |
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