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When You Were There
Contributed by
Emotions4u2c
on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Strolling along and alone with my thoughts
Surrounded with love of a new mornings dawn
Seeing the awesome trees,leaves and knots
Looking forward to opening a new gate...rich green lawn...and a baby fawn
Tears of joy flowing...for I open my hearts gate
Wondering if this is trusting land or full of hate?
Lavished and breathtaking should I stay or go?
Searching, gazing into the light...sitting on the bench I release and let love flow
Thoughts of magic is dancing in the air
A far land kissing the ground and running bare
Dreams memories captavated me
~~~when you were there~~~
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2003-02-24 21:20:00]
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Re: When You Were There
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 09:07:58 AM AEST
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very good write
Sharon |
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Re: When You Were There
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by BetterTomorrow on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:00:39 PM AEST
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| Very Nice!! You're a good writer :-) I look forward to reading more |
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Re: When You Were There
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:53:21 PM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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