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Lovers Rendezvous
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
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Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 04:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Come my dear I'm waiting in Love Street,
Bring your heat and soul, make me complete,
I eagerly wait with a rose and a ring,
Rehearsing my speech as the birds around me sing,
The jewel glows under the moonlit sky,
A tear caresses your cheek as you let out a sigh,
In the meadows we make our sweet love,
Our only witnesses are the stars above,
A lovers clench as we watch the sun rise,
Naked and free, baring no disguise,
We rest our eyes safe in each others embrace,
A moment of bliss we could never replace,
I awake alone; our rendezvous is cold and grey,
I have nothing but memories of you and that your final day.
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 04:53:42 AM AEST
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Crush. Ouch! i landed heavily from that ending! One of the most dramatic shifts in emotion in a single poem that I can remember. A momentous piece really.
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 08:14:12 AM AEST
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| yes ouch... It is not a nice way to end what should have been a happy rendezvous |
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 08:46:57 PM AEST
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Great poem. To me the ending makes perfect sense. Passion this intense can't last forever. Maybe I'm a pessimist. I love this poem!
Heidi |
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 01:53:17 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful, an exquisite write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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wow, intense, Thats my best discription of this poem.
It sounds sexual, although I'm not sure that was your intention
I loved it.
And I agree with heidi,
I think perfect moments like this last for eternity.
Lets face it, the world is not all roses and daisies, but memories of moments like this, really turn you alive. |
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 10:24:34 PM AEST
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i dont know where to begin with this
this began so lovely, ended so sadly
relationships turn out that way too
maybe your next rendezvous will turnout different
take care
-K.Z. |
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